Slice 22 I just want to say

I just want to say

I ate the jelly beans

that were

in the bag

and which

you were

probably hoping

I would share

Forgive me

they were wonderful

so sweet

and chewy

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I am a wife, a mother, a fifth grade writing teacher, a sister, a daughter, a sibling, an aunt, a cousin, a friend, a co-worker, a yoga practitioner, a learner, a reader and a writer.
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6 Responses to Slice 22 I just want to say

  1. 🙂
    I love how you used the form of the poem, and humor, and … jelly beans.
    You candy thief! (at least they got a poem out of it)
    Kevin

  2. Yum…hope they were Jelly Bellies!

  3. I agree with Anita – Jelly Bellies are the best.

    Nicely done. I keep seeing this one used as a mentor text and I need to give it a try.

  4. Tam says:

    Good job on this. I am trying to write one. I thought it would be easy, but it wasn’t, so I will try again!

  5. Dana says:

    HA! Loved this! Now I’m hungry. Have you seen my jelly beans?

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