This is just to say
off your rug
I am a bit
and you are
your room is
nice and tidy
I know what poem you mentored your poem after! Great job with the structure of yours. I can hear the humor and the love in this piece. (How do you really feel about having to vacuum up the crud?) Nice poem-slice!
Love this! It reminds me so much of my crud-lovin’ son! Enjoy the peace while it lasts.
Amen! So fun and I could memorize and recite to my son after he gets back from camp. If I were brave enough to attempt and wanted to waste my time in there. 🙂 Nicely done!
This makes me smile. I spent too many hours in my children’s rooms last week helpnig them tidy. Your lines:
and you are/
make me smile.
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